SwedishPlumTrees's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Steven Universe - Singing]

It's very pretty and easy on the eyes. The only thing is, there's really no animation to be seen. Steven's head is rocking but that's about it. I would have loved even a walk cycle, anything, but as it is, it's a bit too stiff to be really "be" anything yet. However, I'm seeing this is the first animation you've submitted in 2 years. I'm hoping this is just the beginning, and you'll continue to make beautiful cartoons. I love the backgrounds. Can I ask how you made them? All in all, nice work, but there's room for improvement.

ZeTrystan responds:

Actually, I would have sent that animation in the "Art" category if I could, but swf files are not accepted. :(
The backgrounds are based on the ones of the show, so I just tried my best on Photoshop to make something that looked like them. Nothing really complicated here, actually!
Anyway, thanks for your comment! ;)

[Bath Time]

That was pretty good in terms of animation. It reminded me of a mix of Rocko's Modern Life and Invader Zim (a good combo). What I would recommend is maybe making the audio louder, so it's easier to hear. Also, the ending joke is kinda weak. It was a great setup but the payoff wasn't so great. It's a great cartoon though. Props.

Johnopotamus responds:

Thank you for the review!
I am working on mixing the audio so hopefully it will improve next animation. Same goes with the writing haha.

[Global Warming]

This made me laugh a bit, especially the beginning. I really liked the
"are you even listening?"
"Who are you?"

However, the art was kinda sketchy. Some times it wasn't too clear what was meant to be on screen. On the whole, I give it 3 stars for writing and creativity. The plants section was pretty funny. However, clean up your art a bit.

sweetcommando responds:

do you mean make the outlines less rough? yeah, I'll try that next time.

[Ultimate Picnic Beat-Up]

Interesting...

It was okay. The actions were nice, but you need to work on making the smoothest line possible between frames. You need to work on walk cycles also. Despite all this, I really liked the backgrounds and thought they worked well within the movie.

BoomBuster responds:

thanks for the comment, the walk cycle IS sloppy for me too. i was trying to make a good walking animation. i was thinking that it wasn't as good as the other animations because it was my second one

[Monster Stuff]

That...was...AMAZING

That was so amazing! I loved it, especially the music part. The ending was cool too. Mario! Haha. Nice.

Foxcato responds:

Thanks man.
I'm glad you fancied the music part and the ending.